tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1134985645255494328.post9043666723602262734..comments2023-04-15T09:47:13.701-04:00Comments on The Stone Lanes: What are we?The Lord of Ábrocen Landmearcahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06742181797250408274noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1134985645255494328.post-62855542961759521652010-08-02T19:04:35.658-04:002010-08-02T19:04:35.658-04:00Great poem but check your typos, you're deflec...Great poem but check your typos, you're deflecting us with them rather than drawing us in, which the poem otherwise does deftly. You've got a capacity for self-awareness/ self-critique/self-creation that a poet requires. Nice eternal footman echoes, discrete, and from oblique angles. Keep going.Jerry Pragerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09054428435443042500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1134985645255494328.post-42049282160941077382010-07-24T22:28:04.536-04:002010-07-24T22:28:04.536-04:00Dark and very sad.
Brooke
http://www.momentsofele...Dark and very sad.<br /><br />Brooke<br />http://www.momentsofelegance.comUnknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00668283042133858363noreply@blogger.com